Concision Practice
For each sentence, rephrase the underlined portion so that it is simpler.
1. I bought these cookies so that they would be eaten by you and I.
2. Every single person that goes to the same school as I do knows Jason.
3. We are in the process of preparing a meal.
4. We are going to be going to the school dance.
5. To speak in an honest manner, I really don't like that paint color.
6. I had not even begun to wake up when the earthquake happened.
7. The color of those drapes is perhaps almost kind of seafoam green.
8. I have known my friend Miles for I think almost, but not quite, four months.
9. Before the innovation of the drug known as penicillin, there was no way to treat many common.
10. Tomorrow we will use a catapult for the flinging of our flying machines.